Music Video Second Edit

I re edited the music video with new shots as i stated in my last analysis. I haven't re filmed yet but wanted to see what it looked like with more of a variety of shots. I used the crop tool to crop the shots to make them zoomed in however because I shot at 50 frames per second and forgot to focus the camera the shots are blurry, which is an improvement I will make in my third shoot. I also changed the song as it has been tuned and we removed the high harmony. Personally I think it sound extremely different and I prefer it.